most recent rough cut

To Do List

• shoot the rest of the piano shots
• shoot the 'happy' black and white shots (wine & laughing)
• shoot possible argument in past (B&W)
• redo our digipak
• do evaluation questions
• edit rest of video

too much really! ahhhhh help us :(

First Rough Cut

Here is a rough cut of our footage so far, we still have a long way to go. Adding performance footage and more narrative will help this...but we feel we have made lots of progress. We have changed our narravtive, so that anything in black and white is in the past, and anything in colour is the present. We are gonna show shots of Kaneo and the girl in happier times, laughing and drinking wine, then more shots of present, him turning up late and standing her up. Originally we wanted to be more abstract are arty, but we feel this is a better way to go. 
Also we changed the opening, so that the beginning is actually the end. So we'll use that opening shot at the end also.