Final Cut

First Rough Cut

Here is a rough cut of our footage so far, we still have a long way to go. Adding performance footage and more narrative will help this...but we feel we have made lots of progress. We have changed our narravtive, so that anything in black and white is in the past, and anything in colour is the present. We are gonna show shots of Kaneo and the girl in happier times, laughing and drinking wine, then more shots of present, him turning up late and standing her up. Originally we wanted to be more abstract are arty, but we feel this is a better way to go. 
Also we changed the opening, so that the beginning is actually the end. So we'll use that opening shot at the end also. 

Update

To save any confusion, the song we have chosen (Next) has recently been given a new name by the artist, 'I Can't Do This Anymore'. We presumed it was called 'Next' as on the mixtape it was named this, but we soon discovered the video on youtube for exactly the same song, with a different title.

Lyrics.

I don't, 
wanna talk it all out i'd rather just forget, 
you got alot to say but i'm not listening, 
please spare me the tears 
cos they have no effect
and everything we had instead
i should of seen it coming. 
(Yeah) You had me dived by these disguise and i couldn't see
the way you played your game with your tricks you had me deceived, 
but now im over it 
I'm so down to taking that step,
I'm leaving i guess i gotta move on to the next.


[Chorus]
Oh i, 
don't wanna stay in love and live with this regret, 
please, i gotta take this of my chest, 
baby i, cant give anymore
when there is nothing left, im leaving..
I guess i've have gotta move on to the next.

You know, 
you got alot of nerve saying that its my fault, 
we should of thought twice 
before we got involved, 
everything thing you do, 
you let it fall, 
baby you were the cause, 
you didn't care at all! 
Don't tell me that you gave me your best 
you know that aint true, 
be real babe you set us up to fail with all that you do
but now im over it, 
i'm so done now im taking that step im leaving
i guess i gotta move on to the next.

[Chorus]
Oh and i, 
don't wanna stay in love and live with this regret, 
please i gotta take this of my chest, 
baby i cant give anymore 
if there is nothing left, im leaving.. 
I guess i've gotta move on to the next.

Song Choice Update.

Just an update to let everyone know, we've decided to change our song choice. As we found the whole image of our artist is completely different to his actual music. There is some rap, like we thought, but a lot of it is smooth, soulful, and romantic. So our treatment for our video is also going to be changing.

The song we have now chosen is called, 'Next'.
It is on the music player that we uploaded previously of his mixtape.

Music Video Inspiration.

Both of these videos use something that is an intriguing concept of having both slow and normal motion in the same frame at the same time. The effect of it is quite incredible. I like the look of the Radiohead one because it is in black and white as well as having the slow motion, so is hopefully more like our final piece.

Artist Mixtape. (Choice of Song)

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Our choice of song from our artist's album above for our video is track 9. Have a listen.